My special place[is my grandma's house]
Every time we used to go there our grandma gave us pocket money. She would just stash it so it was all ready for me and my brother. When I got home, I just put it safely on my draws until I needed it. But only when my wallet was full.
My Grandma is kind and I love her very much because one time she gave us 90 dollars not because they were very rich. But what is really sad about
her is that both my grandma and grandpa have died.
They had a very big back yard that me and Jacob used to play in. One time we played tag and it was lots of fun!!
She was a very good knitter. One time in 2014 she knitted some clothes for my new baby cousin Zeta. The baby was a girl. Zeta is now 4 years old. My auntie really appreciated my grandma's Knitting.
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By Marcus
wow this was really a good story it really gives me info . something you need to work on would be to make it make senescence
ReplyDeletei liked how you described your grandmas house but you need to work on making it make sense like: a 90 dollar not, just add a e on the end. also all your now have a k at the start you need to take them away. also you said she was a very good knitter can describe that a bit more instead of one little simple sentence.
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